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  1. Chuchuz

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    Made a thing for a friend.
    Have only been doing this kinda stuff for maybe a month. Even then it's on and off.
    CnC appreciated even though there isn't much to it in general. Resources also appreciated.

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    Original render for the girl:
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    Remove the woah part and it's amazing.
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    completely agree...
     
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    Try blending the bubbles tingies with the background, blur out the edges of them xd
     
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    i like it, looks nice :)
     
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    looks good
     
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    beautiful like you
     
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    I think it's great :squirtle:
     
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    cool stuff man, me next please
     
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    Somedays I wonder why anyone posts CnC stuff on RSPS since 95% of the comments are "good work." Which, while mostly appreciated, is completely unhelpful.

    The wireframe drifting out of the circle into the background is bothering me. Since the circle is clearly meant to be a border of sorts with the render popping out, that wireframe also slightly popping out seems to defeat the purpose of it. I'd just erase it outside your circle. It'll look cleaner.

    Not a huge fan of the blue glow around your text. Doesn't really go with the rest of the compo. The main colors of the piece are a dark blue/pink/purple with a hint of cyan blue on the shirt, but doesn't seem like enough to make it a "main color." I think the text might look better with a purple/pink glow instead. Also maybe lower the opacity on the stroke of your text just a little bit. It'll blend better.

    I can't tell if you used a slight drop shadow on your white circle. It looks like it to me, but I'm not 100% sure. If you didn't, consider it. It'll make the border/render stand out from the background a little bit.

    A couple of your bokeh circles are way too harsh. Not all of them, not even most of them, but the one in the pink lighting on the right and the double one on the left could be blurred/blended better.

    Also, I'm not sure if the background came like that, but everything in the circle is not blurred and everything outside it is, but the blue left side in the circle looks like it has been blurred. If that's fixable, I'd unblur it. If that's the way the background stock image came, don't worry about it. It's not a huge deal.

    Other than those kinda nitpicky things, it looks fine. The composition of the piece is created. It looks nice. Just some things can be done to improve it.
     
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    Much appreciated <3
     
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